Critique me! " Alone on sea"

This is a picture im using ina current project in my photo class.

Art News

http://www.art.com/products/p14467990-sa-i2812124/toni-frissell-weeki-wachee-spring-florida.htm?sorig=cat&sorigid=0&dimvals=23946&ui=4443ee4376cf41dabb69394310a0b659

I found this photo on art.com. This was done by Toni Frissell. I picked this picture to critique because it really grabed my attention. The women looks so small and free in the big body of water. I think this picture looks really great in black and white.

What do you think of this edited pic?

This picture was taken at a campground I belong to. I just edited this one for fun. I used dodge&burn often to emphasize the color of the water and sky.

Welcome to my blog; AlyKat

Hi, my name is Alyson. Im into photogarpghy. This blog will consist of some of my pictures to get some reveiw and critisism from you guys. I will be posting daily. I will be covering these topics; art and creativity in the news, discusions on digital media, critiques on peirs art work and my own, and reviews of other art such as movies, illistrations, photograpghy, websites, and , music. I've been in art/photograpghy classes since i began high school. I am currently a junior. I've just recently joined yearbook so I will be improving my photograpghy and editing skills. I like a varity of photograpghy and art work. You will be seeing alot of variety on my page .